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a vampire goodbye by ~bighairedgirl:iconbighairedgirl:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


a vampire says goodbye
to a love he knows must die
this one he loved to long
even though he knew
how they felt was wrong
he killed her in a dress of lace
she bought to wed him
in this place
blood tears splash
on her cold white face
no heart beats
in a empty chest
her life he took
with just one bite
death is all
he left her
with tonight
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~jonothecomo:iconjonothecomo: Apr 24, 2008, 4:49:48 PM
indeeds your welcome keep up the good work, its nice from time to time to read a short bit of text that could say more than a whole story, it convays more emotion the shorter it is I think

so what have you been up to then?
~bighairedgirl:iconbighairedgirl: Apr 24, 2008, 5:24:17 PM
nm, im sick -.-. so iv been in my house for almost a week now . how about u how have you been?
~jonothecomo:iconjonothecomo: Apr 24, 2008, 6:05:20 PM
sick! poor you, I would make you chicken soup if i could

me I'm fine busy thinking about my disertation work for next year... I can't see how almost 2years of uni has just flown by!!

well I hope you feel better soon
~MorgansSong:iconMorgansSong: May 4, 2008, 7:58:27 AM
I loved it, it was kind of sad poor vamp!:tears:
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